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Reviews for: The Fine Art of Betrayal
dennisud
2006-10-22 . chapter 1
I had hoped you had this first before Chains of the Past which BTW is an excellent Crossover story.
I do hope all plotholes are filled and things go smoothly to COTP well!

dennisud
Innortal
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
Good start, only saw one mistake.
James Axelrad
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
interesting concept. i was htinking this was all going to come out in the main fic. oh well. its fun to read either way.
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