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Borolin
2006-08-15 . chapter 1
This reminds me of a deeply creepy moment on The Muppet Show, of all things. They were interviewing Peter Sellers, and one of the Muppets asked him which of his many faces was the real him, and he said something like "But you see, there *is* no real me. There used to be a me, but I had it surgically removed."
Harmony'sSake
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
I love it! I don't usually read poems but I enjoyed that one!

~HS
goldenbubbles
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
aww that was sweet, a really origional idea too! I was intrigued by the summary and i think it's a great poem. I love Tonks/Remus pairings. I've written a poem about them myself but its nowhere near as good as yours.
remusROXmySOX
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
really really super duper cute
great poem, you're a great writer
BekkoHaka
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
omg that was so awesome, that is what real love is all about *tears*
winnifred
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
great job! this is great, and I can definately see this in Remus's POV. but at the end, I think you have a typo or something..."I WANT question you, love, anymore." did you mean "I WON'T question you, love, anymore."? okies, yeah just wanted to point that out. Great job nevertheless.
HogwartsHoney
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
Amazing. Really deep and well thought out. Interesting idea to have Remus doubting if he knows Tonks because he hasn't seen her natural appearance.
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