 starbin21 2009-12-05 . chapter 8I'm absolutely addicted to your stories! Please update soon! |
 Armelle Clarity 2009-10-07 . chapter 2so excited for the end of this story, i don't know how long ago you finished it, i hope it's finished but i've waited ages, you capture the characters beautifully! |
 Kitty Seville 2009-03-29 . chapter 8Wow. I've read all of these stories, and I really like them. One thing I thought of after reading Mary's Story: Why not write something like that in Alvin and/or Theodore's POV? I myself am curious to know how those two acted during the five years Simon was at the island. Please update this soon! |
 kat smith 2009-01-17 . chapter 8 I love thies storyes i think you should right more on thies and maby have a happy ending for theodoar and elanor. |
 ThomasS1991 2008-12-10 . chapter 8I love this story and I'm egar to see what's happening next. What will happen to Simon's & Jeanette's kids?, who will save them?, Who will stop the kidnapper of the young siblings? well, we better find out what will happen.
I rate this story 10/10 |
 Atomos Infinity 2008-10-27 . chapter 8NO!! Please God No!! Not after all that has happened to Simon!! This will tear him apart like its tearing me. Please update soon. |
 Atomos Infinity 2008-10-27 . chapter 7OMG!! OMG!! What is going on!!?? I never thought this could happen, but I guess it was inevitable with all of Simon's secrets!! I'm as hurt as Simon and Jeanette. |
 bbyxbanaaana 2008-10-25 . chapter 8Omg!
Update soon!
Jeanette and her kids got kidnapped right after they left.
Even though leaving was supposed to keep them safe.
Update! |
 Northgalus2002 2008-10-23 . chapter 8 OMFG! This is taking quite a turn! First Simon nearly loses it because of the threats, then Jean decides to go to Theo and Ellie's place with the kids for a while.
And now Jean has fallen victim to an "officer" who's in cahoots with Founder's Island? Finally a couple who have been on the island with Simon, have witnessed through a dream that Tom, Vincent and Mary Ann are in danger! Where is this story going to turn now? What will happen when Simon finds out? Will Jean end up a captive as well?
Are Rob and Judy going to break the news to Simon? Will Simon go on the warpath? And, if so, will Alvin, Theo, Ellie & Brit close ranks behind him? I hope so!
Please don't take too long to update!
Please update! |
 DiceRox09 2008-10-23 . chapter 8o.o
Wow
This is a very interesting story.
I haven't read the first one, about them bieng taken to the island, so I don't really know what happend.
But..
So far, I'm getting an idea.
But wow.
Simon is like.. crazy.. and..
Poor Jeanette.
Jeez.
Update soon |
 SterlingSilverGrl 2008-10-23 . chapter 8OMG! :0
NO! :(
update soon!
PLEASE! DON'T AKE A LONG BREAK LIKE YOU DID! |
 SterlingSilverGrl 2008-10-23 . chapter 7As soon as i saw this updated, i was like 'IT'S AN OMG MOMENT!'
I THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD OR SOMETHING! XD
I'm happy 2 no your back :):):):):) |
 ChipmunkFanatic 2008-10-23 . chapter 8Wow I thought that you might not update again (Phew) and man! Allot happened in this Chapter poor Simon all alone and Jeanette (Ugh I HATE needles although that's the least of her problems) and the kids! Oh man I would be FREAKED OUT! *Shakes head* They should learn to listen to Mary. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 ChipmunkfanNo.1 2008-10-23 . chapter 8Oh no, the Founders have the kids! Whats going to happen to Jeanette? Will Simon save them?! |
 SterlingSilverGrl 2008-10-21 . chapter 6Aw, poor jean. :'(
huh, ya haven't updated in quite some time!
update as sonn as you CAN! |