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| XAmberX 2006-09-27 ch 5,  | abusewe...great chappy, kinda short though |
| VandersLil 2006-09-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseNot bad. Just a little bit out of character in some chapters. But the last chapter in particular was quite good. You really gotta love Darry. He's such a great brother. I wish we could get a little more than a glimpse of him before his parents died and his life changed so drastically - we know he's "tough, cool and smart" and "really handsome"... but he was also really popular in high school and won awards and scholarships... He's given up so much for his little brothers. Anyway, it's so nice to see a fic dedicated to Darry. He's definitely the most deserving of all the characters. Well done. |
| Flag 2006-09-25 ch 5, | abuseAw, that was such a great ending. I really like these, are you going to do some for the other greasers? :) These make me smile. |
| SamSammySamantha 2006-09-25 ch 5, | abuseDarry does need to relax. All that pent-up stress isn't good for anything. As we all know. Good chappie, can't wait for another! |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-09-25 ch 5, | abuseDarry works too hard, poor Darry. UPDATE AGAIN! lol soon please? |
| Ruto177 2006-09-14 ch 4, | abuseGreat! |
| SamSammySamantha 2006-09-13 ch 4, | abuseCute chapter, score for Darry! |
| PurpleBlaze 2006-09-12 ch 4, | abuseI really like all of your "Day with (whoever) stories". Keep up the good work. |
| XAmberX 2006-09-12 ch 4, | abusewe I love you're stories. tee hee |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-09-11 ch 4, | abuseThat was great! you need to update again soon! |
| Softballchick dreaowa 2006-09-11 ch 4, | abusepoor darry |
| AddictionToFiction 2006-09-02 ch 3, | abuseAww, I love it :] |
| xodamhsaxo 2006-09-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseaw darry is being so nice. update soon. |
| XAmberX 2006-09-02 ch 3, | abuseWoa buddy, TWO tacos? He's getting a little on the heavy side there ain't he? lol jk jk jk Anyway. I'm bored. you should...update something. or another lol. |
| XAmberX 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abusewe...I love your story! keep up the good work. It's so easy to follow, and understand :P |