wow I am likeing this! Keep it up!

Oh! Good chapter, I eagerly await the next one!
A new character; joy!

Whoa! You're alive! JK!
Good chapter!
Please Update Soon!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Pleasase! I want to see what's gonna happen!

Oh, the horror! To be tickled by your captor. How embarrassing.

Haha, I found it funny that Running Bear's 'snack' was a rabbit. M, nothing like a bit of bunny for a midnight snack!

Update! Please! I want you too! What's going to happen to Melody? Hurry hurry hurry! Please!

Awe. Tinkerbell in loove. Or something like it. And Peter and Melody? Ooh-boy. I wanna see where this ends.

Wait...Toriko's alive? Phew. Thank the hhigh heavens. Now for killing Melody...or making he bleed really badly, I'm not sure yet, either way, bad bad BAD! -continues reading-

OH MY GOD! I can't believe you killed Toriko! How could you? -sobs- Good story though. Exciting.

Freaking cliffhangers... *grumbles*

Glad to see a new chapter though, short as it is. I like the mind wandering bit. Oh, the cleverness of Peter! LOL

I was wondering when you weregoing to update. Nice chapter.
Please Update Soon!

i like this a lot so update soon.

Hey, ur biggest fan here. Ur on my myspace remember. Anyway love the new chappie. Real good. keep it up!

This is really cool! ^_^

NO! The new Peter Pan planinum edition is so not right!
there is no:
1) Never say Never
2) Thimble part with Wendy and Peter
3) Make believe meals
4) Wendy House
and isn't it supposed to be that Wendy's Aunt adopts Peter and the Lost Boys if so than thats changed too.! i might die if i cant see the old version!