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AEthereal Devastation
2009-10-27 . chapter 19
Nice Zords. The Anubite is yet another. A man with the head of a jackal, in Egyptian mythology. Another is Jormundgard. A massive serpent in Norse Mythology. Maybe you could add those as alternate Zords. Thanks!
AEthereal Devastation
2009-10-25 . chapter 6
Great story. Keep it up!
Wolf Elf
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
I wanted to drop a line to tell you how much i'm enjoying your story(Harry Potter and the Paladins) it great to read a pr story that isn't just 1 or 2 small chapters,I like a stoy to be longer and in doing so gives the reader somthing to sink there teeth into. I also like the fact that show dumbldore (i may have misspelled that, sorry) as being somone who isn't always perfect or right. I'm looking forward to reading more.


Many Thanks

Wolf Elf
Padmus Orion Black
2009-06-21 . chapter 16
"Time Force and Lightspeed Rescue teams can only stop some of the attacks since we can’t walk in and out of the magical areas without problems, the Galaxy Rangers have a bit easier time since they’re powers are mystical in nature,"

as much as i love your story i need to point out this,

both time force and lightspeed have some incredibly powerful weapons, ex. Chrono Blaster, Quantum Defender, Rescue Blaster, & Titanium Laser. they should be able to tear through foot soldiers like paper, weither they be Putty, Tenga, ect...

i just mentioned this cause i hate to see any team put down.
DracoWolf88
2009-06-13 . chapter 10
I would really love to see you continue with this story, and not have to wait another six months or so before you update. Please update soon
HarryPotter'sCharmed
2009-03-15 . chapter 19
Great chapter...
Please, please, please, please, please, don't wait so long to update again...I REALLY is a GREAT story...
By the way, where are Wyatt and Chris? I'd love to read about them at some point...
phantombrick
2008-12-09 . chapter 18
you have got to continue this story it is great
Olaf74
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
Wild Horses
2008-02-23 . chapter 18
Please update soon! Are you going to introduce the other rangers into the fic?
Windsib
2008-02-16 . chapter 15
Hi. I was re-reading this when I noticed that there is a problem with Shane's Animal Spirit. When Dulcea told him what it was, she said that it was the Hawk, but when they called out their powers as well as in the list, it's says Falcon. So which one is right? Ohter then that Very good job so far.
Windsib
Marcus S. Lazarus
2008-01-29 . chapter 18
Firstly, you need to work on your paragraph and sentence structure at times; you sometimes forget to include speech marks when people are speaking, and when you're writing about a long train of thought- like Dumbledore's at the beginning of this chapter- you tend to compress everything together, making it a bit harder to read.
That aside, however, you definitely have a VERY interesting plotline going on here. The idea of the Charmed Ones having a bank account in Gringotts due to their families having served as 'bounty hunters' alone is an interesting concept, and the idea of Jason being Sirius's son from an old relationship creates a very interesting bond between the worlds of Harry Potter and the Power Rangers.
Of course, I'm still a bit hazy on how and when Jason's meant to have disappeared- how could he have ended up fighting Zedd and trapped in that crystal after he'd RETIRED from the Ranger game, anyway?-, but your explanation for how Zedd, Rita and Divatox are still walking about despite them getting hit by the Z-Wave in the Countdown to Destruction is so intriguing I'm pretty much prepared to overlook it.
Oh, and as for your portrayal of Dumbledore...
VERY interesting take on his character here, all things considered; I look forward to seeing where it goes as the story progresses.
I may generally see him as the good guy, but a ManipulativeDumbledore story is always interesting, and this one's definitely one of the greater 'berk' portrayals of the character I've seen. I mean, I've read this one Harry/Stargate crossover recently which has him defend his actions by his belief that the wizarding world needs a saviour, so you can at least KIND of sympathise with his motives even if you disagree with them, but this one's just trying to keep himself in charge on the grounds that he's so arrogant he can't believe anybody shouldn't do what he thinks is best.
Plus, of course, we have the political waves Jason's making by claiming the title of Lord Black; always good to see the Ministry and the Malfoys getting a good solid kick in the teeth, and this one's definitely one of the ones that gives them a highly intriguing kick.
There's just one thing I'm REALLY wondering about; are you going to include references to the horcruxes any time soon, or are you just planning to ignore that little detail?
Well, hope you update soon; can't wait to see what's coming up next!
SilverTearsOfBlood
2008-01-04 . chapter 18
You should make Voldemort find a crack in Harry;'s mind defense. causing him much pain sometimes, and or some control over him. They probably should be discovered durin a battle. Mabey because of this Harry could start to become more angry again. Well i think it is a good idea! I can't wait for your next update! TTFN
Slytherin-Angel44
2007-12-30 . chapter 18
I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Will we get to see the imfamous howler from Mrs. Weasley? Update soon! :D
rellenh
2007-12-25 . chapter 2
Very nice!
pureangel86
2007-12-23 . chapter 18
So did Mrs. Weasley hear that Ron was a ranger? because it sounded like she was still in the area but I could have misread it.
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