this is a way sweet story! i like it.

Aw, this is really sweet! Please write some more - It is amazing how you manage to pack so much meaning into so little words.

these short chapters are short, yet they pack so much meaning! wonderful so far!

I love how Kally is so happy. It was really good! I can't decide if Kaddar's "intentions" in the last sentence are good or bad...

Cool idea on the whole series!

Aw... How sweet! Please write more soon!

Hmm... Almost sounded like Sango/Miroku in a way...
I just don't know how... Haha.

Aw, that was sweet.

OMFG!! IT was amazing! i love it

That was sweet. I like Kalasin and Kaddar together. They aren't actually together in the books are they? Anyway, it was cute!

Aw... sweet! Please write more?

hmm, very interesting. i like the whole short chapter thing. it kinda tells us alot while telling not much, if that makes any sence. lolz.

Ohh this one was happier! I liked it.

pretty good! u should try and make the chapters a bit longer! i finished the chapter in less than 1 min! but it is still amazing!

this is amazing! i didn't know any1 else wrote fanfics bout tamora pierce! it was amazing! she is one of my fav authors!

Liked the idea of keeping everything short and quick, it really sets the mood. I think this story really works.