This is a really good one-shot! Sora is so clumsy xD I really enjoyed it x3

Okay, I thought that this - overall - was cute. It was nice, clean, few grammatical and spelling errors, and it really cheered me up! The only problem is with all the nicknames. I mean, would Sora REALLY call Riku "Rii"? I'm imaging the actual Kingdom Hearts characters right now, and I CANNOT see them saying "Rii" or "'Ra" or any of those (Roxana and Sara are understandable, though). But that's the only criticism I have for you. Other than that, well done. Loved the persona you gave them (since they fit the characters). Oh, and I'm so happy the way you wrote Sora! Oh my GOSH, I wish I could write his personality like that! It sounds so much like him! (I usually just make him overly-dumb). And Riku's personality was good, too. (I make him a bit too sarcastic and condescending, but...)

...Okay, I probably freaked you out with this long review.

In short, loved it.

Favoriting this!

-Shana-san

I can't believe this doesn't have a lot of reviews. I love it! Sweet! It is a favorite! _

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