i love it please update it.

i love it, where in the bible does it name the fallen angels? and please tell me its from the holy bible, not the one devil worshippers use...

oh my god (no pun intended...)! this was excellent. i love micheal and i love belial (which makes being an atheist kind of weird). i never even considered this kind of story before (and by that i mean the pairing and not slash). you are amazing

I never really gave this a review. I only said "WOW," a few months ago so I thought it best now to be more thorough and to also say that I've been inspired by this particular story to write my own.

This is CRAZY GOOD! So interesting and colorful. I love the concept that God is not in Heaven anymore, and that Heaven isn't really Paradise. I love how the fallen angels still love God, though. It's almost as if Gehenna/Sheol/Hell is Heaven only kinkier (heehee).

Very brilliant. I loved the fall. Belial is too cute.

Anyway, your influence is in my story, not intentionally, but it is there. For example, the Gabriel in my story is female (even though Gabriel has always been portrayed as feminine, I never really thought of making it concrete until I read this story). The plans that I have for some of the demons are definitely influenced by your descriptions. So, I just want to thank you and acknowledge it. You should def. read it.

Please write more stories! Excellent job.

FANTASTIC ;)

WOW... lol.

I absolutely adore your writing style. I only know of one other person who's fics are as awesome as yours, and can describe things in such detail. It's astounding, really! I also love the relationship between belial and Micah, they're so perfect for each other. And Lucifer just plain kicks **. Bottom line. XD Anyway, I'm rambling...Gah. Hope you update real soon!

Awesome update. Please continue it when you get the chance.

O we. ^_^

I loved this story. It was really well written. It was a sad ending, though. :( Michael is my favorite archangel, i pray to him a lot, so I really appreciated this story. I don't think there's anything blasphemous about it. Good work.

Wow. I really loved this story. It was awsome. Sad ending, though :(. Michael is my favorite acrhangel, and I pray to him a lot, so I really appreciated this story.

Omg, I loved it! It was an ending I never really thought about happening, but it was such a beautiful ending. You should continue this.

Goddamn! I don't know what to say. You should lengthen this, make it into a novel and find a publisher. I swear I'd buy it, *and* it'd be one of the first things I'll grab in event of a fire. It's that good.

Nyahh~ This really made my day! I really should be drawing my Christmas cards but your story tempted me so much :)
Your writing style rocks so much no words from a puny mind such as I can express it

That was a pretty good chapter. Please update soon. =)