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i like your story but the story seems go fast.. Kenshin is too occ and he gave Kaoru up too fast for Tomoe after he found out that she is still alive..

I believe that he has a honor that he have to think what to do with his situation with Tomoe, Kaoru, and Kenji before he takes a final decision..

The way you describled Kenshin's marriage to Kaoru as if he used her.. He is a such disgrace person! and how he forget everything about Kaoru and Kenji if they are in the trash while he was betrayed them with Tomoe.. It s not right and he will not do that like that.

If Kenshin really want to be Tomoe, he would find a way to get out of the marriage with Kaoru in a kind way without an affair.. I m sure that Kaoru will let him go.

This is not a flame but I want to let you know what I feel. I really like the story but they are too rush that it would kill my pleasure to read ur future chapters..

First of the all I dont care bout the pairing. I think you should take a time to develope the story more smooth and tryin not slaughter the story quickly..

ouch this is going to hurt k-k

Sooo saaadddd Kenji died. He was so kawaii! I really like Enishi & Kaoru pairing better. Great fic.

Why did kenshin marry Kaoru in the first place. Ahhh damn him for being so unfaithful. I like Kaoru so much.Didn't Kaoru forgive kenshin for all his mistakes too? I don't like Tomoe.I really like this fic too.

Man, that's not right.He's married to Kaoru, and they have a son. I like the fic very much.

Oh what the hell! Tomoe suppose to be dead. I have a feeling kenshin will go back to her. I hope that's not true.

darlin', even *I* wouldn't do that to kaoru... um, i'm just curious how you got your inspiration for this... lol it reminds me of someone trying to tell a story without stopping to take a breath... just what exactly are you trying to accomplish here, hun? it disturbs me how you can take such a delicate situation and slaughter it, so please take a breath and check out my new fic, just posted 'Dominating Fate', ok?

i HATE this fic! (sorry) how could kenshin do that to kaoru! he's supposed to love her not betray! i hate tomoe!

Qh yes! i'll prefer the Kenshin-Kaoru paring and the Battousai and Tomoe pairing. Kill steph 4 meee.

Hi Donna! Know me? I'm sure you will soon! You said you were poor. Mmmm...well, then where do you get the money to buy manga from? So... you took Sakura's surname and Yamazaki's name I see. so... interesting! Pls continue.

This chapter didn't do much for the story's developement, so I can't say anything. However, I do hope you continue, because I want to know what happens to Enishi and Kaoru too.

oh yah! real angst. oh well, it's good bait and cliffhanger, you deserve the reviews. keep writing, and i'll keep reading.

...okie, your ficcy is so OOC... nani? I'm sure kenshin won't leave kaoru like that.. and i thought enishi had... erm... disappeared? Screw me.. i dun have the manga... and, to let kaoru *hug* him is... oh well... and you killed kenji... are you evil or what... couldn't you have at least erm.. spared his life? Oh well, this is not a flame.. i repeat this is not a flame! get it? I would never flame unless... ;;

the plot is good, demo saa, you are going to fast, ne? slow down a little.. oh my, what a loong review.. aniwaez, dun kill me k? arigatou!

Always nice to read more ExK stories-makes me feel not so alone! I'm interested in finding out how Tomoe was saved )