Kinky yet sweet. I Love it. And the last paragraph when you used Dawn's name that's just nifty, very well done =)

Beautifully written!

WOW good story and HOT I'm hard as titanium right now keep 'em coming if not more of this story than more like it.

... 'w'

AMAZING :)

All kinds of kinky, definitely some mighty fine smut work here, LadyLefaye;)

beautifuly kinky i love it!

The pretense she made was so in character for Dawn. And Spike being there to see her thorough was completely natural. Nicely done.

That was great!

Great...I think it is wonderful

Aww, this was a beautiful story. I'm glad you decided to repost it. I only discovered the buffyverse last year, and Spike/Dawn is one of my favourite ships.

GREAT. Definitely need more spikexdawn from you. Merry Christmas!! ^_^

I liked it.

I enjoyed reading this, even though I prefer to think of Spike as more of a big brother to Dawn. :)

Your last sentence was great. Way to make Dawn's name work for you!

nice job. Seems Dawn really did give him something to look forward to, and something he never expected.

Debbie