looks good havent finished yet
keep it up
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First off. The Dark Jedi who allied themselves with the CIS don't use the term, Padawon. And Dooku can't have an apprentice, he is one. Rule of Two, only TWO Sith at any one time.

Well a happy and sad ending at the same time. River gets promoted and Grievous looses her! Maybe the sequel will tell me how they go. GREAT JOB on this! Next time I'll check out the sequel! Later!

Poor River! Just WHAT will happen last chapter? I'll look and see!

Oh boy Grievous was MAD! I hope he doesn't do anything foolish! Next chapter to see!

They stuffed up their mission? What WILL Dooku say? Next chapter to see!

Oh yes, Grievous is certinally in love! Going nuts without River around is a sure sign! Admitting it is also a sure sign! Next chapter!

Oh dear! I think I have a feeling on WHAT Dooku has in store for River and Grievous! Next chapter to confirm it!

AW! Poor Grievous! River hurt his feelings! She'll have to make it up to him some how, hopefully before they return to the War. Next chapter!

AH! I see now, Grievous was trying to be more intiment with River. A bit of a problem becasue he is no longer the man he once was, well that's the way the cookie crumbles. Next chapter!

What the hell was that nut Grievous doing?! He has some of the WEIRDIEST ideas! What next? Next chapter!

Aw! River and Grievous are Kamea's Aunt and Uncle! How cute! I wonder how Grievous would react to that? Next chapter to find out!

Oh yeah! These to certinally ARE married! One minute they are alright with each other, the next minute they are arguing! They are SO hitched! Next chapter!

Well how about that? From Master and Apprentice to husband and wife! It'll be interesting to see how this effects them for the rest of the Clone Wars. Next chapter!

Well! This chapter explains a lot! River and Grievous WERE married all along! Any wonder they got on so well! But maybe this IS all just a bad dream as River thought, I'll read ahead and see!