Wow! Very interesting plot! Love it. Hope you update soon!
^_^

You...k-k-k-k-k-k-k-killed...K-K-K-Kenshin?
This is so sad! 8*cries for hot Kenshin* and *wishes Kenshin got better*

Anyway, I think this was written quite well.

Happy writing,

MI

Very good start, cant wait to see more. Yes, how will Kenshin come back? Is very courious to know. :)

Wow! I wasn't expecting the ending to be like that. I thought Sano would be like a mother hen taking of Kenshin or maybe Hiko will too, only a little bit.

TBC? Whoo! I'm curious which direction your fic is going. It should be very interesting to read. I shall wait patiently.

You're doing great, NS! :D