 KittyLynne 2006-08-20 . chapter 1Wow...what a treat to click on this fic and find such excellent descriptive writing, perfect characterization and an extremely clever and well executed concept! I especially enjoyed the fact that it was told from Miaka's pov. For me, it was a logical (and humorous) point that the appearance of another strange creature and beautiful man wouldn't faze her. I also thought the comparison and contrast between the beauty of the 'new man' and the Emperor of Konan was very well done.
Though I respect your decision to make this encounter a one shot, it's my opinion that this premise could be developed into a very entertaining series. (Would love to see what Nakago would make of the Demon Lord! ^__~)
Thank you for an enjoyable read!
Every good wish,
KittyLynne |