That was fantastic. The interaction between the characters and the backstory was so believable and perfect. Thanks for the fic :)

Glorious.
I enjoyed every single line. I loved how Martin's character changed through the years and I loved Lark. Your talent for poetry is very impressive. :) And yeah, the last chapter is heartbreaking. :'(

I still can't get over what happened to Martin, even though it's not certain he's dead... Some day I will write a fanfic with an alternate ending where Martin survives his sacrifice, all is well, and the Heroine of Kvatch is named Empress. ^_~ Or something like that. ^^

Anyway, beautiful story. This is exactly the type of thing I spend hours surfing for.

This is a great story...Bravo *claps*, find someone to compose your music? hm, maybe I could to it...I'm great in singing ;P When your little 'poems' came. I sang along...To be honest my parents where all 'oh' and 'ah' XD Anyway I'm off
Bye *waves*
Greetz FBKA

I love the story, our Lark's are pretty different, I think I'm going to have to bring mine back

Good story. i hope you can put Lark into more of your stories.

That was so beautiful!! I love Lark's farewell song. Thanks for writing this! I enjoyed it!

“I didn't know I was a Septim then,” Martin disavowed. “It doesn't count.”


Hahah this made me laugh!
Great story!

Aw 'Nightingale'... :(

"It was like being born into light."

Interesting line for a vampire! :P

"Martin is like a flame in darkness; if you refuse his dreams you will douse that flame and the world will be a darker place."

SUCH a wonderful line!!

You pull of the Bard-types very well! I love Lark already, and Martin is too cute. Will be reading more...

Wow! I wanted to read the entire story before i reviewed, and it was a marvelous read. well done.

Aw, the ending is so sad. I personally hated it when Martin died. My bro beat the game before me, and when I saw what happened, I told myself I'd never beat it. Still haven't. Anyway, great ending. You really do need to write more stories with Lark. He's such a good character.

I just read the entire story, and I really like it. It's an interesting different take on on game events and I think you've established a credible back story for Martin here.

I like Lark, he's a nive character. Pity he became a vampire though, the poor guy. (Even though I like Oblivion's vampires, he's just not exactly the kind of guy who likes being one)

I also love Lark's songs. Cyrodiil Ladies is great.

Well, I'm looking forward to seeing more soon.

I had hoped that you reunite them :) . I'm waiting for more, please update soon.
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