 LM1991 2009-08-06 . chapter 22Oh, that's not good... Poor Norrie. Please update soon!
Bye,
Lisette |
 Moon Sun and Stars 2009-07-21 . chapter 22Wow I hope dumbledore uses the pensieve thing! Wait does this mean he forgot all about Jack and Lizzy? |
 IheartJohnnyD 2009-07-18 . chapter 22*jaw drops to the ground* He-what-how-memory-LOST!? CONTINUE SOON! |
 Swann Shooter 2009-07-18 . chapter 22OH SNAP!
This is totally awesome! and it tastes like the last episode of Bones... yum.
It makes me all sad but kinda happy at the same time. I'm happy because you have no other option but to continue this awesomeness lest ye wished ter be flamed. Yar...
I just want to see James deck Malfoy one good time. In the temple perhaps... |
 Cortistoolazytologin 2009-07-17 . chapter 22 Zomg! No! Stupid malfoy. Stupid Malfoy with his evil ways and sleek, silvery evil hair. Poor James! Update soon! |
 Authoressinhiding 2009-07-10 . chapter 21This chapter was really, really sweet. I liked it a lot. |
 Moon Sun and Stars 2009-07-09 . chapter 21Wow I feel like a fangirl when I type this but THIS STORY IS AMAZING!! I'm so glad it is with James instead of Jack mainly because Jack is just overdone! |
 LM1991 2009-07-05 . chapter 21I really liked this chapter :P. What an imagination you've got... wow. Please update soon!
Bye,
Lisette |
 Authoressinhiding 2009-05-23 . chapter 20Me thinks the shop keeper is none other than our dearly beloved and occasionally departed CAP'N JACK SPARROW! But that's just my guess. =) |
 Cortistoolazytologinhi! 2009-05-22 . chapter 19 Wow... interesting. |
 Sachita 2009-04-20 . chapter 20I am glad that my review made you smile (= I loved this chapter!
The bit with the kraken made me chuckle, just imagining James with his sailboat on the lake...and the kraken coming up to the surface...lol. All in all, I think you stayed very true to everyone's character. Draco is so evil a child, really and I think that telling the judge that Draco is just a kid is really very Norrington-like. I am sorry for my English, it's not my first language at the moment and I am tired...so, sorry (-;
Brilliant update and please go on soon,
Sachita |
 IheartJohnnyD 2009-04-13 . chapter 20Ah! I still have no clue who the shop keep is! lol Great chapter! I think my favorite line was...
"“That’s me. No spine whatsoever.” An amused smile.
There was a slightly awkward silence, as though the others could not wrap their minds around the combination of Snape and humour; only Dumbledore was unaffected, blue eyes twinkling with a faint merriment behind his half-moon glasses."
Not sure why but I just liked it! update soon! |
 Little Miss Sparrow 2009-04-12 . chapter 20Why hello thar. =D It's been a while, hasn't it? Always good to read some more of your writing! |
 SwordMasterZ 2009-04-12 . chapter 20ok I admit it I do like seeing Norrington Tortured. You know what would realy tick him off if will came looking for him. You know that whole traveling between worlds thing from pitats 3. |
 Swann Shooter 2009-04-11 . chapter 19Holy Cow, Batman! This was a totaly awesome chapter! I've a guess for the shopkeeper is: Capt. Teuge, Jack's Dad. James never met him, but he'd be slightly reminded of Jack... that or it's Jack and James' losing memories, in a big way. |