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| urabadinfluence 2008-04-22 ch 4, | abusei think you need to write a sequel to "Everybody Knows"...good idea huh? |
| Wander52 2007-11-07 ch 4, | abuseI know it's been over a year, but we so need another chapter...please...this storyline is so god. |
| Weezle13 2007-06-03 ch 4, | abuseHay come on you cant stop there i thought that you were going to sort out hodges. Please keep on writting. PLEASE! Pretty please. ~Weezle~ P.S PLEASE! I will beg lol |
| Dorothy Of Kansas 2007-04-11 ch 4, | abuseOk loved it but i kinda had a stupid moment when i read the previous story...i thought it was ecklie in the car park and not hodges(who is a little weird, but ecklies the pig, NOT hodges)! i guess i've lost way too many brain cells today, with it being the holidays i guess i haven't been using my brain. anyways i'm rambling so i'll just say i loved the stories...BRAVO DOK |
| ProdigiousDiscourse 2007-03-06 ch 4, | abuseAfter reading this and picturing grissom like that i have the sudden urge to puke. |
| Raquel86 2006-10-21 ch 4, | abuseThis was realy funny... congratulations... |
| Liz100193 2006-10-18 ch 4, anon. | abusethe funniest thing i've ever read. I nearly fell off my chair the first time i read it and a few days ago a teacher said 'Blue Hawaiian' and i laughed do much she gave me a DT! |
| SidleMyIdol73 2006-10-02 ch 4, | abuseAwesome conclusion! I loved Greg's mantra, it was so cute! Poor Grissom-I've always wondered why he wears those damn hawaiian shirts all the time. Good Story! :D SidleMyIdol73 |
| KittyX1981 2006-09-17 ch 4, | abuselove it |
| Kristafied 2006-09-08 ch 4, | abuseMy husband and dog are both staring at me wondering why the hell I'm giggling like a loon. Very, very funny, great image (hideous shirt open, hickey on chest, hair mussed) giving Greg the mental scars. Hee hee hee. |
| anneruhland 2006-09-02 ch 4, | abuseWhat a hoot. Greg reminds me of a hyperactive 5 year old. Right now I wuld say it is Grissom 5 greg 4. We'll see who wins. |
| smacky30 2006-09-02 ch 4, | abuseLoved this. Made me laugh. The idea of the inscrutible Grissom hitting Greg in the side of the head is just funny. |
| sweet-surrender5 2006-09-01 ch 4, | abuseNo one would argue that it was a good thing! It's the funniest thing ever! Hahah, ** Grissom is the best (drools on keyboard). Great chapter -- hope you continue soon! -s.s.5 |
| odeepblue 2006-09-01 ch 4, | abuselol, pretty cool ;) |
| tokengeekshipper 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuse"On the downside though, Grissom was blocking the only exit to the room. A minor difficulty, one which Greg decided to ignore for the moment." Do you have any idea how many times I have found myself in Greg's shoes? You set this up just for me you did! The famous “Death Glare” had nothing on this: the never before seen “I-Will-Scoop-Your-Heart-Out-With-A-Spoon Glower”, Greg decided. I'm sure Ecklie has seen that face once or twice lol! |