I have read this story twice now and found it a nice one. But for the life of me, I cannot figure out why you rated it a T. It should be a K...

I enjoyed that. I love sappy endings

i loved this!

very well written, and very humorous

maybe you could check out my Star Wars story?

i loved this story, making sure i read it all right to the end, but it could have been longer. maybe u could have put more scenes into it to make more plot. but overall, i liked it and the characters were like they should be.

Oh! Kissing! Happy day!

Oh, this ended so quickly! I mean, I could've stood to see just two more scenes to wrap it all up. But I know you're sick of this thing and wanted to get it OVER WITH, so I'll be gracious. I loved the banter back and forth - it stayed in character the whole time, which, unfortunately is unusual. :)

This story was so much fun. I mean, seriously, what post-ANH AU things aren't? And the kissing makes it even better. H/L stayed in character, the plot was fun and interesting, and it fit in with my conceptualization of the characters ... which is, of course, the most important thing of all time. ;)

By the way, you are so evil because Starbuck survived by piloting out a thing that I'd be tempted to base my ideas for the inside of Vong skips. And that whole two episodes made me happy.

That makes you quadruple evil, if you're counting.

Oh. Now we have mundo plot!

Loved the footnote part. It's fun seeing Leia's insecurities and Han's tendency to make them all ... not so bad. :) I've also been very partial to hand-holding in H/L before they were H/L. It's a safe but physical thing and I like that.

Loved loved loved the Jexa Sune bit. I always thought Leia would be into the butt-kicking female entertainment. :) Sounds like she watched an awful amount of Alias back when she was younger, eh?

Ha-ha. Han's diplomacy was fabulous. :) So Solo.

M-hmm, a daring escape, a roadblock and a penultimate chapter ends! Gah!

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... his felings, Leia ... :)

Sigh. So much to love about this story. The sheer shippiness makes me happy. The action is fun and the tension is real. Characterizations on the whole are well-done and make complete sense (in longer stories, it's always so difficult to maintain good characterizations, but you're doing fine with it), and there are, of course, few (if any) grammatical errors to comment on.

You definitely need to keep up on this thing! It is just way too fun for its own good.

My one question is where the AU aspect of it will come in. I'm assuming y

AHA! I was so right! But you *interrupted* them ... just because Threepio isn't around, you conjure up an Imperial patrol? Sigh ... you and your plot fascination.

I loved Han's "yes, sir" - purely because I could see him keeping his head down and hiding his eyes if only because he'd have a hard time keeping a straight face while saying it. Shows the pressure he's under, if he's acquiescing to a snot-nosed Imperial person-thingie. :)

Before THE KISS, I so saw Han like he was after some prey, moving all slow. And that wonderful line about a lazy grin completely stood out. It was marvelous.

Moving on ...

Oh! Comforting!Han strikes again!

I loved that they yelled at each other during/after the fight - they're just too adorable for their own good.

I'm thinking a kiss is in order here soon ... in fact, I'm gonna start ordering one.

H/L KISS! H/L KISS! H/L KISS!

Moving on to the next chapter ...

H/L KISS! H/L KISS! H/L KISS!

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O! Good chapter... but too short! Please write more!

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This is a really good story.

You should continue.

You got me excited when Han and Leia started to kiss, but of course something has to interupt them. LOL.

Amythest Girl

I'm reading and enjoying this! Loved the kiss; it did sound like an offer to me...

Good thing that Imp didn't do a thorough search of the ship. I love it when Han & Leia play husband and wife, they go so well together. Indeed, one can't be too careful these days with all those Rebels about!

[Leia breathed a sigh of relief. It seemed that this trip was going much better than the last one. Leia thought that if she were optimistic, she might take it as a good sign. She didn’t believe in luck, but maybe Imperial patrols existed for other reasons than to make her life difficult.

Right.] Uh, oh, I've got a bad feeling about this!

Well that was just too easy. I don't trust that officer or that bording. But I loved the kissing!