   Dark Mousy 6/8/01 . chapter 1Well...It was pretty good. I could feel something going on there, portray's Duo's thoughts very well. On a Spiff Stick scale of 1 to 10, (1 being the best and 10 being the worst) I'd give it 5 Spiff Sticks of Justice! (*Ooo* and *Aaa*) Pretty good! I liked it! |
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