Very nice, I like this keep it up! Nice gentle start setting the scene which I like then the story gets moving. Good bit of Fanfic.

This is possibly the best chapter yet. You have captured the bewilderment and the confused fear of the Teleri so well. I'm worried about Calmea though. I can't wait for more!

This is lovely, and a really good idea. You capture the uncertainty and helplessness of the 'little people' very nicely. The hesitation of the Teleri vs the forcefulness of the Noldor is nicely balanced. Thank you!

what an unsettling adventure this character has found herself on!

I worry about what she will see next and who she knows who might fall at the point of a Noldorin sword.

Wow, I think I started reading this a long, long time ago.
YES! AN UPDATE!

Either way, I thought this was great, and don't worry about the speeches. You did very well!

;)

Just in case I haven't read this before, I shall favorite it!

I like this story-- well-written and extremely interesting. It's nice to see these events from the point of view of a Teleri.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Violin Ghost

I'm glad you updated!

it's good. the characters will encounter tragedy no doubt... but they feel like survivors...the easiest thing to get over writer's block (for me anyway) is to picture the future and then figure out how they all got there... I'm sure you'll get over the block. You've got a good writing style. Here's hoping for another update...:-)

I am enjoying this story. It is good to finally see an update!

It would be nice if with the next update you add n a little family tree or explanation of the relationships of the characters to each other. There are so many OCs that it's hard to keep track of who is who.

Looking forward to more!

WOW! This is really great! The characters are well developed and the momentum of the scene is just right for the situations at hand. I can't wait to read more.

This was fairly good until the 'killer fog' bit. Ah, well. No ones perfect.

Celegorm

Good start, this looks like it could be intersting, especially as your main character is betrothed to a Noldo.

wow! Really well written.