is this plot based off of the warrior cats series? please pm me! Great fic, though

Please, please, A thousand times please update!

Wow! This is a really good story too, Reavien. Oh, I hope you will take your own advice in the chapter on "The Light Path" and "finish what you started". I'm dying to know how Donnie gets all 6 stones, gets his son back, and we find out what happened to Kalanii/Kalusha. I even hope you go on to write more TMNT stories. I also like seeing Raph baby-sitting his niece, almost like they have a special bond, perhaps more than just the emerald-green skin. I'm even secretly hoping Kita will talk or communicate somehow, since she's growing stronger on those fruits, but she's a cute baby either way. I also want to know what they name Donnie's son once they get him back, and what becomes of Hope. Just to let you know, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat. Please finish the story!

-Robyn

Update soon

Awesome story. I hope you don't mind, but I wanted to do one similar, but using sonic the hedehog characters. Please don't stop writing the story! It is one of the few that look forward to reading every time I sign in. I have to know the end of the story! Like if don gets his boy back, and if they find out that hope's mom was a part of the Zhahoren. Also, will Kita ever speak and will they stop the bad guys who threaten the herd? Please finish it! You are doing an amazing job:)

"teach me?" Does Raph have that kind of patience? Can't wait till next chapter! Tell me it's coming soon. Please?

You haven't posted since MAY! Where's chapter 32? Where where where! :P

Hey! You might know me as Donnysgirl on Deviantart! I love this story and the comic as well! I'll patiently wait for more! I'm worried about Donny...

You've inspired me, Rea. Instead of being an English Teacher someday I will become an Adorin Teacher. And if I become a vet (which is much more likeleh) then I will teach all my future equine patients how to speak it so that butt-faces like Spifteh can't butt in D8

Sorry for the late review *scratches head* For some reason I only recently realized I hadn't read the newest update.

Aww, no more? Lol I await the next chapter ^^ great work so far!

Yes Yes YES!! OMG! I have not read the chapter yet but I shall. I'ts just too late right now and my dad's kicking me off so He can do his college. I didn't know you had made a sequel. I feel very stupid. You're a great writer. Can't wait to read this story. Gotta go now bye.

Nice little interlude so to speak. It was a tense little scene when Spifteh materialized out of nothing behind Raph, but even so, I thought the bit where Raph saw he could have accidentally hurt Kita was a lot more shocking! You need to learn a bit more self control, Raph! ...And somehow develop the ability to learn to be bilingual in a record time. I really liked how Queia questioned them. Shows that the rest of the herd aren't as ignorant as they might have appeared so far.

OH. I liked this one a lot. GO RAPH! WHOO! Bad Spifteh, bad! GO AWAY!
Loved it a lot. Can't wait to see if Raph really learns Adorin. How cool! Also, I wanna know what's happening to Donnie. Poor guy. I hope he gets back and gets his son, too!

Woo, what a lovely thing to wake up to on a Monday morning. At least now my day will be cheerier. 8D

Yes, they tried to convert Raph to Corthionism. The heathen sensation that's sweeping the nation.

Thrill-monger. Yup, that's Raph to a T. And he'll get himself skinned one day because of it. (rolls eyes)

Ah, so a new language was the little thing you added in. Spectacular.

(stammers) Um, no, Spifteh, Raph wasn't saying anything, no sir, just go back to your cave of death and despair...Gosh, that scared me.

(SHUDDER) Creepy...Queia, take my word for it, you watch your back.

Ohohohoh. Raph's got a devious plan in the works. (grins devilishly) I look forward to it. Great new chapter Rea, keep it up!

LN

UPDATE! And Raph's got a PLAN...Sneaky turtle...^^ I like this chapter! Keep up the great work!^^