 SarcasticProcrastinator-AMLF 2008-08-08 . chapter 2See, boys should never underestimate certain girls! Riza being one of them.. nice job! |
 K.R. Cantanzaro 2007-01-06 . chapter 2These are very cute and funny!please update soon! |
 winglessfairy25 2007-01-04 . chapter 2In the weeks after he began dating Lieutenant Hawkeye, the higher ups at Central noted an astonishing rise in Colonel Mustang’s work and productivity. i love this line.. wehehe.. ehehe.. anyways, great job! love it.. keep it up! please update soon! ja!
Erinn~
LOVE IT! great work.. |
 GummyBlove 2007-01-02 . chapter 2Lol I love this
Plz continue |
 Suki dah Turdle 2006-08-16 . chapter 1that was kind of depressing!! but its really good @.@ |
 RedSoul 2006-08-15 . chapter 1Lovely! Write more! |
 Thursday Addams 2006-08-13 . chapter 1Aw that was sad. It was very good though, please write more soon. |
 Dailenna 2006-08-12 . chapter 1Aw :| That's really sad! I think the clinching moment is the fact that he leaves while she's still speaking. It's always good to find someone who can tug on the heart-strings without overdramatising! Good work! |
 loyalsoul 2006-08-12 . chapter 1I love this! Please continue. |