This is so, so sweet. It is nice to cuddle and sleep. The different rhythm in breathing distracts me from sleeping. So I always end up curling up in my side to sleep. Sigh

Very nice! I love it. Going to my faves!

very nice story

Beautiful!

No other word to describe this story. I just discovered this story, along with the prequel, today and at parts it left me breathless... You way to describe the feelings evoked at certain times where so heart warming. The bit about Shizuru recalling her night with Natsuki and her longing for a moment woth her where touching, I've always liked to read about that romantic side that Shizuru likes to hide, and I think hates a little bit, but that se can't control in front of her Natsuki. This one definitely goes to my favorites.

nice job. i liked it when u write it from Natsuki POV

:D

Aha!omg loved it! totally a good next chapter after Learning How to Walk! I hope you have more in the future. You're very good!

0MG! i didn't kn0w LHtW Had a sequel..i'm so stupid f0r having missed it earlier

-i love h0w you delivered the smut scene! it wasn't explicitly shown but it's still hot! along w/ it were sensical musing of emotions and desire..it was fulL OF Love-very far away from a cheap plotless porn fic!

-i definitely admire your capability to become subtle with your words albeit leaving powerful impressions..

-fluff was sweet..

-voyeur shiz was go0dD

Loved this story! Thanks for sharing D

Aw, and here I thought "Learning To Walk" was so beautiful. This is twice as good, or more! Sugoi, sugoi! D This is really sweet. Rarely do you find a love scene - and I really do mean LOVE scene, not simply sex - that evokes so much emotion, where really you can just imagine in your head what went on however you like it, yet leave you with the feeling of the depth of love that these two people have for each other. This is innocence merged with passion. Bravo!

oh mi god that was amazing! thank you! XD

This was a good story.

That was amazing in every freakin' sense of the word, my brilliant friend! XD First person Natsuki is lots of fun, and I liked Shizuru third person on the second half. I'm glad you put so much effort and passion into this oneshot: it showed!

I agree with the other reviews. It was wonderfully written, I enjoyed it very much so.

It truly is a beautiful story, and for one that contains sex exceptionally well done. Its great to see a sex scene that is just filled with love )

Aww..

that was actually a good oneshot...

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