Aw, and here I thought "Learning To Walk" was so beautiful. This is twice as good, or more! Sugoi, sugoi! =D This is really sweet. Rarely do you find a love scene -- and I really do mean LOVE scene, not simply sex -- that evokes so much emotion, where really you can just imagine in your head what went on however you like it, yet leave you with the feeling of the depth of love that these two people have for each other. This is innocence merged with passion. Bravo!

oh mi god that was amazing! thank you! XD

This was a good story.

That was amazing in every freakin' sense of the word, my brilliant friend! XD First person Natsuki is lots of fun, and I liked Shizuru third person on the second half. I'm glad you put so much effort and passion into this oneshot: it showed! ^^

I agree with the other reviews. It was wonderfully written, I enjoyed it very much so.

It truly is a beautiful story, and for one that contains sex exceptionally well done. Its great to see a sex scene that is just filled with love =)

Aww..
that was actually a good oneshot...


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"I am Duran, I lick" - Fujino Shizuru

That was pure comedy, and I've fallen in love with your Shiznat writing because it's pure genius. I can't describe it, but your fictions just never fail to transport me to where the characters are.(Which seems kinda ecchi considering the fic I'm reviewing for :P)
Please please please write more since Shiznat fictions are still lacking!

love it!

Another great story. Natsuki and Shizuru are such a cute couple.

shizuru-duran. lol.
aw... i really love the way you write. the words are so smooth and they just flow all together. So romantic. -sigh- this story completed me. lol. If you do continue with another story i'll be there to read it. XD

renny-chan

I know this is a way late review for your fic, but after reading it the third time, and still having the same burst of emotion, if not more, I decided to send you my appreciation for writing this fic. There is no word to describe how awesome it is, and the scenes involved. To anyone else, it might be just a PWP, but to me, this is the ultimation of love. I want this kind of relationship consumation happened to me. I cried for a long time, because it was just perfect. Thank you, once again, for another wonderful Shiznat story.

I haven't even seen all of Mai-Hime yet, but this is a great story. *thumbs up* Love your work, especially your Noir fics, & I'm glad to see that you are back writing again. Cheers! ^_^

that was cute. :) an embarassed natsuki is always cute. hahaha! :) anyways, a sequel would be appreciated, very much. please think about it. :)

peace!

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OMG. wow... words cant describe the beauty of what is written here. ive read ur first story and loved it, so it was a more than pleasant surprise to see that you had written more. please please please let this continue. the way you write just makes this seem real so please continue with your wonderful stories. i tend to read them over and over again... i just find them that captivating. so please allow this to continue, for all the other ShizNat supporters out there