Very good. However, I think the Kingdom of Heaven is actually New Jerusalem. I'm not perfectly sure on that, I could be wrong. Keep up the good work, I like this story.

Intersting take. I just hope this isn't going to turn into some crappy SI. What's up with the review system? In the summary you said this was for readers, yet if people don't review you won't write? Overall not bad, potential to get pretty good. Awaiting update.

interesting please update soon

Awesome! I love it. Heckuva good.

Pretty good keep it going

I agree. I like the story and were your going with this. Keep it up.

this is good update soon please

Interesting story. I like it. Keep it up.