OMFG I ablsolutly LOVE this story I can not wait for you to update.

update this elegent excellent great thrilling great story. PLEASE P.S. U-KNOW-POO would give you constipation if you dont. LOL

its really good so far. but you don't really have to put so much swearing into-especially if its to get a better rating. just keep it cool. its really, really good so far.

this fan fic is awesome plz continue i want to know how you will work maddy in to the final books

this is really good so far! i usually don't like to read fanfics but this is great. keep it up!

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As I was reading this, I was saying to myself,"This one is getting a review."

I wouldn't have done it any other way. It was so good, I read it twice.
And the slap part got a good reading over too.
I love it when I read a Fic and it makes me hate someone. Like when Maddy almost~ killed Ginny, I was rooting for Maddy the whole time.
I wonder who's going to give Maddy some romance from now on.
Seamus?
Neville?
...Draco? Nah, they're related.
I'm sitting here brainstorming. Its not working at all though.
Someone older perhaps? REMUS?!...That'd be something I'd look forward to. -wink wink-
And when is Maddy going to get rid of that cough?
I have so much to say! Blah! No, its fine, I'll just sit and wait for the next chapter. =]
Hope you had fun at camp.

Oh my God, you updated! Yay! Seriously, I always have and always will love this fic, so please update as soon as you can!

wow, i am truly loving this story at the moment. please update soon, i need breaks from the never ending task of revising for my GCSEs.

Yay, you've finally updated! This story is worth the long wait though, especially these last two chapters. As much as I want Maddy and Harry to just be HAPPY for once, I can't stop reading ; their relationship is real, and appropriate to their age and Harry's cirmstances. But this not so M-rated but intense business you hint of in these next coming chapters...bring it on. God, they deserve it by now, ;D. Keep doing your thing, and keep the chapters coming!

I love this story! I really like how you've got a character who pretty much knows everything that Harry is thinking or going to do. It's really cool, it kind of gives Maddy and edge. She's all-knowing, which is pretty awesome. I have just one question, anytime they are saying goodbye/night, Harry will say something like "Goodnight, Mad" (from chapter 30) Maddy will then say something like "Night, Harry..." (this is also from chapter 30) "I love you..." The question is, why doesn't Harry ever say i love you to Maddy? I don't think you've ever had him say it in this story. Oh well, keep writing, I need more!

Chelsea Nicole Muse Lover

nice chapter! I love the harry/maddy interaction :)
actually, the 4th book was always my favorite one out of the entire series :)

M.C.E.Black, I've read all of this sory in the space of two days, and I just have to say that I love it! Although Maddy has some Mary Sue qualities about her, like being half merperson, that does not bother me because you have made the rest of Maddy so...not really 'normal', but...she has her own demons and problems, too, which is fantastic! Plus, she isn't always there to save the day and her and Harry don't have a stereotypically beautiful relationship. Also, I love her past with Terry. I never would have thought of his character to be like that, but, the drama he brings to the story is awesome! (If I were Maddy though, by now I would have shown him what's what and slapped him around a couple of times...in the nicest way possible, of course.)

Normally, this kind of story isn't my first choice, but you have pulled me in! I just have to say that from what I've read so far, this is a great franfiction, and something you should be very proud of. This is story goes very highly in my list of favourite fanfictions, so keep doing your thing and keep up the good work!

This story is amazing! I absolutely love it and it never has me bored for a second! I love Harry's and Maddy's relationship... it's a lot more realistic and believable than most of the romance stories on this site. They're not all kissy-lovey-dovey all the time when they're alone, and they have some issues. And you have a plotline, which is always nice! Update as soon as you can! This story is great, and Maddy is one of the best OC's I've ever seen done!

So I've decided this story is amazing. It's well written, has an interesting plotline, and the has a nice pace. I'm appalled it hasn't gotten like a million reviews (or at least a few hundred). I just needed to stop and review in the middle because this story is fabulous :) I'm gonna finish it now!

isnt maddy allergic to haryys invisibility cloak?

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