wow. i really like this paring. nice story! :)

Cn't wait for more, update!

wow the first one who right to the end of the mangga great one I love it soo much. more more

so romantic. lol update more but more action. please

Beautifully written i must say! Definitely amazing! I enjoyed it very much!

woow! awesome! love the prologue...so detailed

Aww.. Preggy yuya.. Well, it only makes a lil difference knowing that aka-chan looks like kyo.. She would still have kyo-looking babies!

Wow. I love this.

But, I'd love Kyo to save her ♥

Oh... this is what i call a spoiler! Nicely written though... nice. Aka and Yuya DO make a cute couple... muhahaha...

Good idea, but its very 'see spot run' styled. It doesn't keep your interest. Spelling errors. But as I said its an interesting idea. (Also don't make it so blocky, you have like five different paragraphs stuffed into one.)