I WANT MORE TOUJI/HIKARI FICS! This was too sweet, I wished the series had a scene just like this! Please make more, I beg you!

Rushed but still cute! Toji and Hikari are so kawaii!

COMMENT: :D :D :D! I like hikari and touji fics too o... ... ... :D write more! :P

It's beautiful. I like your writing style, peaceful and charming.

same complaint as dot boy. below.

But it is a 'short' waff. I guess I could let that slide. Cute and to the point. Make this into a 10 chapter version! ) Just replace Shinji and Asuka's name ... everyones OOC anyways P.

uhhh they started the kissin and sayin i love u too fast..

Great fic. no da.

This is pretty good, a nice easy read.

THAT WAS TIGHT!

ITS KINDA FUNNY,CUZ YU JUST ABOUT DESCRIBED HOW MY BEST FRIEND GOT HIS GIRLFRIEND WHILE I WAS HIDING WITH MY OTHER FRIEND IN A BUSH CONGRATULATING OURSELVES ON A SUCCESFUL MISSION...NEVER MIND. A SEQUEL WOULD BE COOL...THAT REMINDS ME...I GOTTA WORK ON MY SEQUEL TO MY ACTION/ADVENTURE JAMES BOND/ENEMY OF THE STATE THRILLER RIPOFF!

Cute and sweet, just how I like it! _

WAFF. Very WAFF. But I like it.

That was really nice. sweet.

CUTE!I dont know if you write lemons,but if you do ,or if you want to start,PLEASE write a lemon dealing with Hikaris and Tojirelationship! PLEASE!

Yay! Someone realizing that Toji and Hikari are sooooo ment to be!

kAWAII

Awwwwwaaahhhh, ain't they a cute couple. It could have been the only non-seriously-traumatic relationship in the series, if only Gianx cared.