rofl! This story is so much fun! It had me in fits of laughter and snickering, ohyes! The way they interact, concise and so well put.. I particularly enjoyed the scene where they were in the sewers and Lorne threatens Ronon..

Is it over or is there.. more, pretty please with a virtual cherry on top? :D

I have just read this through completely laughing at the fantastic humour and interaction what a delight, RononGate LMAO.

Brilliant. And funny. And witty. I loved it!:)

Hilarious. Oh goodness.

Read it straight through and laughed, and laughed, and laughed. Is my John better now? I hope so. I loved the PCN whump (I love all the JS whumps). Good story. Thanks.

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hahaha, so I just laughed...alot. Keep up the good work!

Wonderful, lovely, hilarious! Poor jinxed John... ;)

i love this story an i notice u havent updated in six months are u going to finish it?

funny! update! love the jinx

OH, delightful! Just - just - delightful! I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story. You show a dedication to the craft that defies the intrusion of Real Life and I thank you for it. Each chapter led me on to more chuckles and snorts to the extent that my family doubted that I was reading fanfic.

One suggestion is that, given Sheppard's presumed history of frequent contact with medical personnel, it's doubtful that a life-threatening penicillin allergy would only now be discovered. Though you don't mention if he's been previously exposed...

But it was a neat little plot device, wasn't it? You painted a very clear image of poor Ronon trying to manhandle him down the steps. Oh, dear.

Thanks again for a great story.

Totally enjoyable.

Another wonderful chapter! I simply adored this, as well you know! I love drugged, woozy, sweaty Sheppard! Sigh... More please! :)

Seriously, they *can't* blame John for this stuff, surely? Maybe his new bout of whumpage will make everyone too worried to assign blame?

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

I don't think I have ever laughed so much at any other fanfic. This is fantastic. I really love the lighthearted whump mixed with the serious stuff. You have a real handle on Sheppard's dialogue too.

Can't wait for the final chapter (or more if needed)