What going on with you. Move you ass and write new chapter. PLEASE. I love your story. Please please !

Please update this. I have been waiting for a long time for an update. I want to see how his family and friends learn the truth and how they react. (I want to read Dons reaction to learning that Charlie was the man with the blue eyes from COD 2 and his nightmares) so once again great job UPDATE!

Please don't stop the story here!

Is this the end? if not UPDATE. I love this story

Alright, first off, I want to say I love the idea of this fic. I love secret!super!character stories to death and I've had some fun reading this trilogy. But I also have to say that I'm not too impressed with your realism or characterizations. Too much melodrama and crying, especially from the older two Eppes men. A beta certainly wouldn't hurt and I'm not even going to get into the completely out-of-left-field Mikaela romance. I realize this story is a bit outdated and you've probably improved since, but as I haven't gotten to any of new stuff yet I'm going to play it safe and critique here anyway.

Amazing- I admit I saw the MikiCharlie pairing coming but I admit I was also hoping that Charlie might have been intimate with Christian or Julio- nothing serious but more casual and friendly...lol- I am a bit of a slash pairing nut.

i really really wish you would update i love this story i'm waiting for the day they find out who he is. its an awesome story.

Please make an other installment of when they meet his girl friend and what not. I would really like it if you did another one, your are very talented and creative. I like how you developed Charlie's character

i love this story it's so good

good luck and can't wait for next chapters

so glad they got together!

is that the end? cuz i not complaining if it is, seriously this story rocks my pokadotted socks! i just really want SOMEONE, ANYONE to find out about his work as ghost, it sounds like a great suspense/action/anticipation scene to me:) maybe they share a case and his mask comes off or he overhears charlie on the phone or something, it could eb a one-shot, anything, pleasepleasepleaseplease!

glad charlie got himslef together, love the tats and also having mikalia be there:)

Wow. I just finished reading what you have posted of this series, and I LOVE it. I love the idea that Charlie is not quite what he seems to be. I'm quite sad to see that it seems like you have quit working on this series, and all I can say is PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY! I know its been like 2.5 years since you last updated this but I have to ask.Thanks

This is the best series on this sight. Please finish this story. I want to see how his family reacts to how he has changed. I want to see if they ever learn the truth. If they do I want to see their reactions. You have a way of drawing your readers in and it would be a shame to not finish this story. I would hate to see this story never get finished. You did a great job of developing the characters in the 3 stroies.

Can you continue posting the story? it's really good, and I want to see how it ends, and how Don and Alan react on Mikaila... So.. please? I'm begging you here! :)