It looks like Sven (or Veld) is trying to make a rift between Tseng and the Turks.
I liked the characterization of Tseng and Hojo, it was well done and something I could really see happening between the two. I liked Reno's little shock over hearing Tseng's *ahem* interest in Aerith. Those Turks gossip more than a sewing circle, I swear.
The explanation on the summoning process was a nice little bit of information, and it does make sense given the story and all. If I can remember back when I last played the game (long time ago) I think leviathan can be found in Wutai. It just makes me wonder now if Yuffie is going to be in this fic.
Tseng seems very knowledgable, well in the game he knew a lot of things about the Ancients. Which would probably explain his interest in Aerith, but I think it was more than just her being a Cetra that he was interested in :P
Encouragement! Yes I think you should finish this, I like it and I want to read more.
I don't see why this hasn't received any reviews so far. I thought it was very well written.
The story sounds exciting, it is something new. The Aeons are a good intrusion into the story, and it fits with Aerith and Tseng's background. Also I liked the beginning, it was very vivid. I felt like I was right there.
Oh and I love Reno and Rod, the Turks are so cool _