well here i am at the ;lates chapter and i realised i havent reviewed either.

this story is really awesome. it takes of with a bang, and it keeps intensifying towards the end. more twists turns and plots as we go! i cant wait to see the next xhapters :) i think tthat this is an amazing story, and whatever you do, dont give up on it! this is one of the really good stories abouth south park on this site. keep it up! cant wait for the next chapter


Bring it soon, Kodes

This story is awesome. It provides a realistic situation of what would happen in these circumstances.

THIS... should really have more reviews than it does. It's really good; very intense. Keeps you on the edge of your seat.

It's frightening, though. I can see the parallels between this, history and 1984 (which I just read in school) and it terrifies me.

I also find it disheartening that Kyle can't even contact Stan for fear of putting himself and his group in danger. Hopefully they'll meet up at some point, though.

All in all, a very good story so far. Please update soon!

Yeah, an update! x3 I love this story a lot, and I let out a rather embarrassing squeal as I checked my e-mail and found out this was updated! As for Cartman being behind Shelly's accident, well let's just say I wouldn't put it past him. For now though the main question on my mind is: how long can Kyle afford to stay in hiding before the consequences of his actions hurt the ones he cares about most? Knowing Cartman: probably not very long. ;) Update again soon!

Wow! This is a really good story, and very well written. I can definitely see Cartman growing up to be a politician who pulls the wool over everybody's eyes. I know if I were Kyle I wouldn't have trusted him either; Cartman tried to kill Kyle how many times?

I can't wait to find out what happened to Kyle.

I'm lovin' the dystopian turn this fic is heading towards. Keep it coming !

I have been reading this story since it first came out, and I finally decided to review it. I LOVE it! This is seriously an amazing piece of work. Don't give up on it now, because you have me hooked!

How can Cartman cut money from movies when almost all movies are privately rather then publicly funded?

OK, so I actually read the whole thing, and I realized I didn't review yet!
So yeah, I'm liking it so far, keep going with it!
And don't worry, I know all about that whole Canadian writing about Americans thing... It can be hard. But you're doing fine (IMO...)

Why does this stpry have so few reviews?
Well-written, detailed, characters portrayed perfectly... What more could someone ask for?
Ah, and the plot thickens. I'm anxious to see how things turn out, obviously. Amazing how there's still so little resistance from the general public. That will come later, I suppose.
One thing, though: Although I have no doubt no one has gotten through airport security with a fake passport, they can't really claim they have caught everyone with one, since if someone had a believable enough couterfeit passport they would be none the wiser. Of course you think you've caught all of them.

*Very* interesting premise. I've always thought that Cartman would make a formidable politician.

One tiny nitpick - you have to be 35 to run for prez here in the U.S., and you've got him as 31.

Keep up the good work!

I love the characters! I especially like how Shelly is so in-depth. You really have to be creative with her, since she's a minor character with no real distinguishable traits.
I really look forward to America's decent into communism! (Plus the slash, heh heh.)
Update soon, please! ^-^

I'm Canadian too! We're like Terrence and Phillip! Haha. :)

This story=awesome :)

So... awesome...
Can't... find... words...
I can't wait for future chapters! I love evil, manipulative Cartman! Yess...
And I'm curious as to how the slash will play out.
You know more about America than I do, and I live in the U.S. Canadians... Showing me up...
Update soon, please! ^-^

Sorry I didn't review earlier! I forgot or something... Sorry...
Great so far! I can't leave a concrete "awesome" yet, seeing as the plot hasn't fully "taken off" yet. So... keep working!
I'm so excited! It's finally getting to the "evil dictator" part!
Update soon, please! ^-^