loved it

hun ur really should have stopped writing this story, coz it's 2 good 2 be left alone. So I beg u to reconsider writing it coz it rocks!

love it, please update really soon

this is a great story.

Funny,keep going, it seems good enough to read, just one thing, please make chapters bigger, I wanna read more.

I hope that you will continue this story! I want more.

omigod you have to write more i can't wait to see what happens.

good stories cant wait to read more of it soon

totally great

It's interesting so far. I'm slightly confused...only on where you put that he had pain in his head, but said that there would be bullet holes in his tux...unless he got shot more than once. Anyways, may I suggest finding something to seperate scene changes. Some symbols won't stay...but others will. You can also click on a button available when posting your chapters, that puts a bar there. The button's easy to find...it has a bar on it. _

Anyway, I like it so far and can't wait to read more. I hope you can update soon. _

write more soon

real soon

write more

uh k

cute story but it seems like serena sounds like a boring person i still like the story it's good and you also have some misspell words in your work

awesome story

Good story, you should update soon! But one thing that I would like to point out: "So far, she learnt he was THIRTY, four years her senior, he had become a paramedic because he wasn’t cut out to be a model and he was the middle child with two sisters and two brothers." Is it supposed to be THIRTY or THREE?