Oh come on there has to be more?

All right, Sarah!

Go!

Sarah is stupid.

Poor Jareth.

just brilliant so far!

Wonderful story and I love the qoutes!

KEEP WRITING!

I just thought to re-read your story, since it was so great and all, and once more you're amazing. Absolutely amazing. Oh and one more thing before I go: I HATE YOU! Why did you have to add that last chapter? You're evil! And what's worse? You enjoy it! Never mind that I enjoy being evil, that's torturing OTHER people. It's just plain rude when it's done to me. *indignant pout* If I didn't already worship you for your writing, I might just have to hate you, or at least combine the two. Anyway If I haven't totally scared you away forever and ever, stop by my story 'The Irony of It All' and let me know what you think, or e-mail me, I adore talking with other authors It makes me feel special. And if it sounds like I'm begging, that may be because I am.

oH, EXCELLENT! I loved this, especially the scene with the fairy in the cellars... made me think of my son's Zelda game,lol, but Sara would look better, I'm sure.

Is there really more coming?

I hope so. You have such a nice touch.

EW EW EW i DO hate u! and love u! lol this is very good and well thought out! u havta write more! :) *bravo*

*Stephanie*

I simply LOVED IT! You are awesome! I just can't wait until I find out what you're doing with this, (and in seaQuest as well, as it seems you've been hanging around there lately!) Please, write more! It would be a crime if you didn't!

all right good story but now what. keep it up

*giggles* _I'm_ excited, and I know what's going to be happening! ;) Very sneaky there, girl! I love it! D

great. please write more!

okay, so what happend and are you going to make a sequel?

Yes!

Please say you're going to write more chapters so I can forgive you. :-)

I loved this story, but what do you mean by adding this last chapter? You know this means that you have to write more, don't you? Otherwise you might just find yourself wished away... Good authors like you shouldn't be allowed to keep us hanging :-