hey, wow, this poem was amazing! i absolutley loved it! awesome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D

The beginning lines were wonderful! So clever :o) And I loved how the pace of the poem changed with this verse:

'How can I, from where I stand,

Teach him, make him understand?

Our mutual hatred, my own disdain,

Pure resentments he can’t contain'

(or at least it appeared to change to me!)

Did you mean 'protect HIS worthless life' on line 23?

Great job! A brilliant account of what Snape might have been thinking!

It's pretty good, although "For my fail" is either a typo or a horrible grammatical error.

that was cool, good job..

i really felt his pain... good work

ill hazarda guess that snapew as once in love with harysmum