I LOVE THIS! I had this huge, stupid grin on my face by the time I finished reading this.

Wow. That was quite sweet, and entirely adorable. I had a very good time reading it.
A few of your sentences seemed a wee bit awkward, but they were very minor moments that didn't interfere with my enjoyment of the story. Also, I somehow doubt that Tifa would be the type of girl who'd go and make a big deal of getting her hair and nails done. I kind of think she'd be self-sufficient with that sort of thing. Oh, whatever, it doesn't matter. She was freaking out right then, and maybe she would put in that much effort for Vincent.
I like what you've done with Vincent's character. He seems much more like a well-adjusted human being without losing the personality he had in canon.
Marlene was both cute and believable. Barrett also turned out great. You have a really good grasp of these characters.
All in all, this is an excellent fanfiction. Keep up the good work, and please bless us with more of your writing soon!

ta ba brutal!
I loved it!
A LOT!
made me laugh a lot too! ^^

Oh...wow...that was awesome, R u gonna write more?

LOL That's amusing and cute! Haha I loved Vincent's technologically challenged mind! :) I can just imagine him flipping the channels... and somehow ending up on the Disney channel with Beauty and the Beast on, then watching it! :D VinTifa, gotta love that couple.

Oh yeah, really awesome story.

i love this one! it's quick, cute, and easy to understand! poor vincent...even i'm not that good with my phone and i've had it since june! well...i got my first cellphone may of 2006 but that doesn't really matter! i have a different one now! crap! i'm rambling! i'll shut up now! x3

TifaValentine99

Update!
I bet it'll be good :D
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love it,plz update soon

Aw that was so cute and so wonderfull, if i were Tifa, merlene were dead because her opinio xD
Sorry if my english isnt too clear! I dont speak xD it!
Well nice fic!

The fan girl in me started squealing and giggling like crazy when I found out that Vincent bought the phone for Tifa.
Alas, I still have to actually review the story and not incoherently rant about the warm fuzzy feeling I get from this story.
Kudos for keeping Tifa, Marlene and Barret (during his short appearance) in character. Marlene's curiosity was simply marvelous and it brought out the whole plot. Tifa's emotional outbursts were very much like her, but it seems to me that you didn't quite prove why Tifa should be with vincent instead of Cloud. I just think that the argument, "she never really had a taste for normal men" didn't justify it since anybody in their group is far from normal, not limited to Cloud. Perhaps there are other subtle hints that I missed, but I just feel like pointing it out.
Vincent is not completely in character. His mood swings are... rather interesting, but not IN character. It adds the flare to the story, but it didn't quite fit. Still, I like the ending where Vincent resorts back to his calm, quiet and plotting self. As I said, the moment he called Tita was the moment I realized that your story was absolutely fantastic. The "I love you" could have been deleted since I don't think that Vincent can openly admit his feelings, so I think he would rather say it in person and cherish the moment since he rarely shows any sign of caring. Or... he might be too scared to tell her face-to-face and this is how he chooses to do it... but it would contradict his courageous nature. Hh... I'm confused. Either way, it was very breath-taking since I for one didn't expect him to be witty in that sense. Sarcasm suits him better :p
Well, I think I reviewed this story enough.
I hope you continue writing because your originality is admirable.
Guinea Pig ^^

Haha! Go Vincent!

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I found that overall, this fic was amazing, but it got a little confusing in the middle. It was hard to tell whether or not the scene was a flashback (until the blonde girl spoke again) and I found that, at first, it was a teeny bit sloppy. However, I later saw how this sort of fit in with the rest of the story and it no longer seemed sloppy.
Vincent's charrie seemed a bit off (Sort of. It also seemed kinda good for him in a way, I can't make up my mind), too, but hey, you did a GREAT job with Tifa and Marlene.

Wow! That's really good! I love it. It really shows both their characters very nicely.

Well done.

Loved it, I wouldnt mind having Tifa buying me a phone anyday and twice on weekends.

ZOMFGROFL
This story is SO CUTE. Please tell me that there's going to be another chapter!!

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