Well this was a truley wonderful story! I do encourage you to keep writing. The real book was simply marvoulous! I am glad you are writing about little known books... I you ask me I'd say you are really going some where!

very good..do you plan on writing more?

I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Please continue.

That was intresting, but oh so very long... or well to read at once!

It's good but instead of writing the entire story in one chapter, separate it into like ten chapters instead. It will hold on to people's attention more. Good job.

Great story, some complicated termanology, is it finished?

-Aqua