OMG... that was so well written it's kinda scary. This is only the second story of yours that i have read but you are quickly becoming one of my fav authors. Keep up the amazing work!

Elegant and somewhat tragic, I love it! Beautiful work.

ho-**. that's so ** up it's awesome! Damn, i've never read something as strange, yet awesome, as that. First timer! *favs*

WONDERFUL!

Ooh, I loved it. Great job. The POV and the way you executed it is wonderful! Yay to you. ^^

Ugh, you're worryingly good at portraying schizo-Riff... :) This was good... It took me a while to figure out exactly who was talking, but other than that, this is, in my opinion, pretty much flawless. Good job!
Isa