i loved this fic it was awsome, i always wondered what kahn though in the movies lol it's too bad you didn't get more reviews it was awsome anyways i loved your fics and thanks for reviewing mine the other day i got chapter four up if your interested and i changed a couple of things to the writing.

You keep slipping between the past and present tenses.

If Rigel and Nathaniel are dead, then shouldn't Kahn care at least a fraction as much as Selene does? He seems to be taking this all very lightly.

I'd like to see longer clips of Kahn's thoughts. Right now it feels like I'm jumping back and forth between the movie and Kahn, and they should feel the same.

That was great! very funny!

I loved this it was rilly funny! Were in the hell did you git the Super-Smurf/Sonic the Hedgehog thing?! LATER DAYZ!

I'm shocked too that no one else has reviewed! This was a delightful retell and I'm sad to see it end! I hope there's a sequel or at least more Underworld fics from you! :)

are you kidding me, I the first reviewer? Thats not right, because this is a really funny story!