AHHAH! XD

XD Christanity wasn't even aroudn back in medival times! It's a newer religion but that was FUNN-AY! XD

Glad I'm to be able to type, because I was holding all my laughter!


Keep it up!

“... Umm...” Fenthick paused. “Well, if you didn’t love me, then it would render your entire betrayal pointless, which would totally destroy one of the few interesting plot points in the entire game...”
“... If this game ever has an expansion and I’m in it, I’m going to tell everyone I never loved you.”
Fenthick :’(
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Great chapter! It was really funny and hilarious.

Poor Fenthick. Unfortunately everything that was said in this chapter is true.

I doubt that Aribeth was that sane, anyway.

Good job, mate!

Update soon!

WW

I'm reading this :) What I wonder is what did FENTHICK see in Aribeth. I laughed at this chapter. And, well:
A similar name? Would that mean that you're accussing these character from being sues? I can't wait to see the next chapter :D
Keep it up!

Great work, NyBCR! You have a lot of talent.

trees speak gangsta. brilliant.

LOL again.

sorry for the useless reviews...but this really is quite amusing.

LOL.

Okay, this was a rather strange, yet amusing chapter. And I still think that Nellie is the most sensible person in the entire story…

But I am not the best to judge, mate.

I liked the chapter, nice work.

Word!

WW

Gangster trees? Oh, the mental images!

Anyway, I'm enjoying this story quite a bit! It had me giggling like...a very giggle-y thing.

I'm looking forward to reading more!

~Valar'VeeDub'Wolf

“But Dad,” Nellie protested, “we live on a wheat farm. Can't we just fill another barrel with wheat without going to town and buying a barrel of the wheat we sold them there?”
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Sometimes it hurts being the only rational person in the world…

Nice chapter, mate!

Update soon!

WW

Hello, mate!

Again, it was a very funny chapter.

Personally, I think that it was a bit short, but if you prefer to write short chapters, then continue to do so.

Keep up the good work!

WW

Lol, great start! I especially like that bit with the handbook, hehe... update soon!

“It’s not like she’s gonna miss one apple,” Nellie said, taking another bite.

“I suppose not, but they’re all wax,” Mrs. Cooper replied, taking a jar of strawberry jelly out of the cupboard and placing it next to her plate.

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Wow! Another great chapter! And it is full of wax in it!

I enjoyed it very much!

WW