Oh, poor Suzume-san. That's so sad. This fic really touched me. I'm not really a huge Kuronue fan but your story made me feel so sad.

I would say more but I've got homework to finish.

Ja ne

~Fuyumi Togashi

So cute! I love it! Bravo! Touya doesn't seem OOC to me. I'm so happy Touya-kun found love. Touya-kun should have more stories about him on Oh well.

~Fuyumi Togashi

It was really good, and I loved the Latin phrases. (So much that I actually had to copy them down.) The song fit perfectly and your work is really amazing.
No need to guess, it did come out okay. lol Better then okay, it was wonderful.
Keep writing!

so adorable. there so needs to be a lot more touya stories on here. ^.^

That... was... so... CUTE! Personally, I liked the ending.

You don't like the ending? I thought it was cute. Especially that last line. You know, when I started reading the first paragraph, I thought it was about Keiko when Yusuke left for Demon World. Anyways, love the writing. Yes, writer's block sucks so much. I get it a lot. To get over it I do five things:

> Watch/Read Yu Yu Hakusho
> Pet my kitten (no idea why this helps)
> Play with my Hiei plushie
> Eat dark chocolate
> Read Harry Potter

I hope your writer's block goes away soon.

Buh-bye,

Fuyumi

Once again, you've knocked me out of my seat. Great, great one-shot. I almost cried. -sigh- Now I wanna hug my Hiei plushie. WAAH! Soon I won't have time to read fanfics because I start school next Wednesday.

Till next chapter,

Fuyumi

You seriously had writer's block? I luv moments like that! No idea why, though...

Absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. It was well written