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JellybeanChiChi
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseCeramic gnomes as Grillows. That's good stuff.
The Smoose
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseTruly, truly amazing! Every single word had me laughing so much! I think I may have had an ** somewhere...anyway! TMI, adios!
LovinSomeCSI
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abusePlease don't let this be the end for you guys! I love to read your stuff when I'm at work (without your fanfic, I may actually have to work, instead of trying to conceal my giggles) There is so much left to parody...just think, season 8 is right around the corner.
Great fic.
SaraLou
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseROFL. Ok, now I'm back upright! That was hilarious. I know it's older, but I just found it today! Way to go!
AmazonKitten
2007-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou two are GODDESSES. I woke my mother in law up reading this. I especially loved the way you ended it *grins*
csi-ds9
2007-01-08
ch 1,
abuseAh, now I understand why your stories are going away. The story is just too funny. I love it, and all the oddness it is.
Freckles929
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuse-Okay, I've read all of your stories, but this has to be the best one, and the funniest I've ever read. My stomach hurts from laughing so hard. I dunno why, but I laughed the hardest at these two parts:

“The Grillows,” Greg supplied.

“Those are Grillows?”

He shrugged. “Go with it.”

-I guess just imagining Grillows as little broken ceramic gnomes is what did it for me!

“Okay, I won’t mention the unbuttoned shirt, because that’s been done to death. And I won’t complain about the tight pants, because they’re crotchtastic and I’m enjoying the view. So I can’t really come up with anything. Les?”

“Yeah what’s up with the wife?” she drawled, sliding onto a bench before them. “Because ah... let’s take a gander at exhibit A...” She gestured to Catherine, looking her up and down.

“And, let’s consider Tina, exhibit B,” she said quickly, clapping her hands together before spreading them before her, palms up. “Um, it’s not the coworkers thing because Grissom and Sara are TOTALLY humping like bunnies-”

“What?” Catherine screeched.

Lauren nodded earnestly. “Yup, and Grissom has an eleven-inch-”

-Oh and I liked you incorporated dialogue from the show this part:

Leslie frowned. “Aw, I’m not ready to say goodbye!”

“Come on,” Lauren nodded, taking her hand. “I’ll take you home.”
Invisible Evidence
2006-11-12
ch 1,
abusei. love. you. two. people.
i. love. this. story
i. will. recommend- cause thats what i do. and sofia got eaten by a bear! hahahahahahaha
thegreatbluespoon
2006-10-15
ch 1,
abuseThis is the funniest damn thing I have ever read in my entire life, not even just fanfic, but anything! My brother and his roomies just kept staring at me because I couldn't stop laughing and almost literally fell out of my chair! Badass you guys!
sweet-surrender5
2006-09-19
ch 1,
abuseLMFAO...you guys are the GREATEST. hahah, i can't stop laughing!! wow, that's likely the funniest thing i've read since "101 ways to kill Sara Sidle". actually, this is funnier! LMFAO!! man, i can't wait for another one...

“Hodges, don’t you know that pink lace panties on a man can be very attractive?”

He waggled his eyebrows. “Really?”

“No. Not really.”

^^ = greatest line EVER.

-s.s.5
Windy City Dreamer
2006-09-13
ch 1,
abuseFirst, I'm shooting ff for not sending my dang alert. Second crotchtastic had me laughing for what had to be a good minute and a half. And finally, I can't believe this is it for the dynamic duo of snark. I think I'm going to pout.
DolphinAnimagus
2006-09-02
ch 1,
abuse" 'Oh,' she nodded finally. 'So cannon crushed the Snickers, the Sandles, and…'
'The Grillows,' Greg supplied."

Hee!! And Doc Robbins writes Grissom/LH. This (like your other parodies) was brilliant . . . and hilarious ^_^

Aw, you're leaving, CSINut? I'll miss your stories.
shinjomama
2006-08-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseIn my mind, most of those things are true anyway.

i.e., The Doc totally writes G/LH fiction
Ally-617-luv-tv
2006-08-20
ch 1,
abuseIt was, of course, hilarious. I loved it. I could not stop laughing. Ny aunt and uncle we're staring at me, freaked out. So then I had to pretend to laugh along with the tv. Anyway, this is your last story? *sad face* That makes me sad... well I can always reread. And I think I'll go reread This Is Not A Parody now.
--Ally
RenLissa
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseOMG! That was SO funny - excellent tying up of all the loose ends. Just remember that even if GSR is cannon - I mean canon, you can still write about it. I mean right now we still don't know when, and where, and how, and who knows (Carol has been insisting that the audience is the only one, but really, their CSIs), and what will happen now/what will happen when the others find out/what is up with that shirt? Thanks for the laugh.
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