Interesting start. lolz I like the name Kei. How's it exactly pronouced though? lolz I tried with a prologue on my Zelda story, but got no reviews. So I just took it out and entered in the first chapter. Still no luck. lolz Well keep up the good work.

Very nice. Easy to read and engaging. The topic's a good one that isn't often touched upon well. I look forward to seeing where this one goes.

Intriguing title, by the way. What does it mean?