that was pretty good

i hope you make more AyuHiyo fics!

Interesting way of doing it.

This one-shot is really good. Hope you will make another fic for Ayu x Hiyo. I really like those two! Keep it up! v(^_^)v

I like how you write Hiyono! I can just picture her in my head. :D -Kayla

Though an avid AyumuHiyono hater, I must admit it wasn't bad for the pairing. Nice oneshot, keep up the good work.

:D The Roseanne opening theme song: "What doesn't kill us is makin' us stronger. We're gonna last longer than the greatest wall of China-" Ok, I'll stop, I don't know all the words.
That is an interesting point though. Lol, you just love writing one-shots with cool quotes, dontcha? ;)