 Merlynnod 2007-01-08 . chapter 1Oh I know that feeling...That walking into a room, and a part of you is just oh-so-sure that there'll be a familiar face sitting in that same ratty old chair...
When you first wake up in the morning, and I you don't remember that everything is different, and will be for all the rest of your life...
And why you always cry alone. Because you are so determined to be so very, very independent, because for some silly reason it's so vital that no-one ever know that you hurt more than you can say.
I know this feeling...better than I ever wanted to. You wrote it perfectly. I very much hope that you are feeling better now, that some catharsis has been gained from pouring yourself out into words on a page. If nothing else...it's somehow comforting to know that I'm not the only one who understands how this feels.
Lovely story. (And I'm sorry for the over-long review...but your bit of writing hit a nerve...and it just seemed wrong to leave something short and pithy in its wake.) |
 Stupid is as Lana Does 2006-09-05 . chapter 1dude. I think that about sums it up. |
 HouseCat 2006-08-15 . chapter 1I can relate to what the previous reviewer is saying. Maybe you could make this a prologue, and elaborate on why the department was shut down, and explore Cuddy's relationships with the doctors some more. It's not very convincing for me. It is a nice little fic (especially after reading your A/N - very sweet) but it just needs some more information.
Good writing, though. |
 Angelfirenze 2006-08-14 . chapter 1Hmm. I'm not quite sure what to make of this. It doesn't strike me as very in character for Cuddy, particularly her supposed use of the word, 'suck.' There's also the fact that we get no basis whatsover for what precipitated the leaving of House's entire department. There's no mention of Wilson or anyone else in PPTH who had a soft spot for House and the Ducklings. We need more background information. |
 Vanessa 2006-08-14 . chapter 1 I loved this, it'd very interesting!! :) Keep up the hard work! :) You're a great writer for Cuddy :)
God and peace
Vanessa :) |
 mikesh 2006-08-14 . chapter 1Hey good story. |