Oh **, holy **' ** - your writing is like dark chockolate, can't go away till the smallest traces are still in mouth. I really liked your writing, there are many captivating episodes. Characters are nicely wriiten, especially liked the Haunted House project, the basement in particular, and the description of a tour... awesome!
Terrible ending, I was terrified, poor Sasuke, poor Naru, poor Neji, poor Gaara, terrible ending, ecpesially without any trace of single hope.
Is there a sequel of the story somewhere in your mind? Or are you planning to leave all of them miserable?

WOW I just finished reading this story and I really really liked it! poor gaara and naruto aw my darlings. i can't wait to see what'll happen in act II! i hope u update soon xD

u r cruel T.T

i...i loved your story, i thought it was the best thing in the world but you...you sick, twisted human being! i dont mean to be cruel but how can you hurt gaara like that! he never had anyone, in this sotyr his life was even worse!! and you made him...neji would never EVER do that!! ever!! he would help gaara and you know it! i thought this was the perfect story...but now I see its justa cruel way of building up someone's hopes of someting good and then smashing them like they never even existed, never even cared!! i might read the next one, but i will never forgive you for what you have done to gaara. never. he deserved neji. he needed him and you ripped his heart out. say whatever you want back to me, but i will never forgive you. this story...it made me cry. you really are...too cruel

ggod story, though sasuke and naji are both selfish **.

KYAH!
OMG this story is so good im going to read the next one!
Seriously i love it



-Wuv the Playfulness*

Wonderful!

Wow... the end brought tears to my eyes. And no matter how much I wanted to HATE Neji and Sasuke... I can't. At least not completely. They're victims just like Gaara and Naruto, but I can't help but think that even with their pains and baggage (which is far more greater then Sasuke's and Neji's) Naruto and Gaara never would have fallen for Orochimaru's trap. I'm thinking Sasuke and Neji don't deserve them... but maybe you'll change my mind with the next Act.

Very well written and full of emotion. I love the parts with Hinata and Itachi making each other think and I love the interraction with everyone else. I'm amazed you don't have more reviews -- maybe you should try re-wording your summary. I know that's a big factor in getting ppl to read fanfics. Just a thought. Great job!

~Duchess

You made me laugh hysterically - you made me cry. This is brilliant, you have an amazing writing talent. This was... ineffable.

hey,
that was sad in most words,
reading the ending how it is,
it's making me cry,
and i better go before i get mushy,
~7ds

Excellent story!! It was amazing!! I can't wait for the next part, so update it soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^

argh! Neji and sasuke! *shakes fist* they are so mean... i hope Gaara and naruto are ok... please review soon

oh my god this is so cute! i love it!

i really liked your story i'm not through yet but i'm afraid i'm going to get no sleep becuse your story is so adictive ( hope i spelled evey thing ok >_

Wow, what a way to end it. Very unexpected. Neji is such a fool. And I have no idea what the hell Sasuke is thinking. I hope his reasons are better explained in the next story.