 Obsidian Night 2009-11-26 . chapter 11 -jaw to the floor- I'm so speechless... I have nothing to say!! I loved it! I'm a very bright person, and can usually figure stuff like this out easily, but this!! THIS completely threw me off! so many twists and curves!! A very thought out fanfic., even if you did it on a 'just do it and see where it goes' intention. the way it all fell together... Wow!
anyway, absolute praise for this fanfiction. loved it so very much, and I wish a sequal would come out for this story.
as I write this, I realize that this goes to my top 5 favorite story list, and trust me, it's definatly up there!
I hope to see similar works of art like this come the future, and by now, you probably are wondering why I'm babbling on about nothing, so I'll finish with this:
"THIS STORY KICKS BUTT, YEAH!
-Obsidian Night |
 RavenUchiha 2009-07-29 . chapter 11 Its a very good story. Though I think you should correct your title. Yes there is romance in it but its not with Itachi, its with Kisame. :)
Just sayin.
But i loved how u created this story. It was very good. |
 kitten652 2009-03-23 . chapter 11HOLY SHIT! this kicks butt! i am head over heals in love with this story and cant wait till you update! WHAT A PLOT TWIST! i never saw it coming! please can you make some actual ita-saku moments now that i know whats been going on!! and i love kisa saku!! i ttly loved this whole story and what you did with it!! |
 kitten652 2009-03-23 . chapter 8aww i love kisa-saku |
 kitten652 2009-03-23 . chapter 7DAMN IT!! can you please keep it ita-saku-kisa!! WAA!! i would rather have a threesome than someone getting thier heart broken!
anyhow I LOVE THE STORY! i cant wait till you finish all four!! |
 Regin 2009-03-18 . chapter 11I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!! |
 ANBU Allysa 2009-02-18 . chapter 11LOVE THIS STORY! You would make an awesome writter for mystery stories like Detective Conan. You would have to be smart to be able to write this brilliant piece of document that should be put in a frame! |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 11Now THAT was freakin awesome. Talk about an awesome read!! I can't believe I was so dumb that I didn't figure out Itachi was Orochimaru until chapter 10. Damn my stupidity! Ah well... My shock when I realized it was priceless. lol. This story was so entertaining. I can't WAIT to read more. My final opinion, Two thumbs up. 5/5. 100% Just pure awesomeness. Good job. ^.^ Much love.
-Katie-chan |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 10Omg! I can't believe I didn't figure this out in earlier chapters! Holy crap I feel stupid! |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 9holy crap this is getting interesting! |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 8Poor Sakura. That kisame x sakura moment was entertaining. |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 7Itachi is being so odd! Ew... Sasuke was here... That's yucky... |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 6Kabuto? What the heck is he doing here? O.o |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 5What the hell is up with Itachi's blood? That's so weird. |
 k92littlered 2008-12-20 . chapter 4(laughs) She's pissing off a homicidal Uchiha. Sounds like fun. Can I join? |