Aw. Poor Roger, his girlfriend dying...but he got Mark, who's so much better. Amazing story.

Wow. That was really good, love. I even got a little teary at the end. JUST a little. See? I'm trying to like him. I'm trying real hard. XD

But yes. Great job, baby.

I loved the changes you made to the beginning, it works very nicely. Keep the bits you took out, though, you could use those sometime! I know you put a lot of work into it and I wouldn't want you to lose that :)

Great job