 Failing in General 9/4/07 . chapter 1wiered but still good |
 Yoda's Padawan 8/18/06 . chapter 1Wow. Wow. Wow. What more can I say? That was...awesome! VERY well written. Wonder who it was? |
 Spirit Dream Writer 8/16/06 . chapter 1Wow...this is very well written. Very descriptive and all of the above. I don't really know what else to say except this is a very good one-shot. |
 Lady Starscream 8/15/06 . chapter 1wow. Good descriptiveness, too. And you never know, he doesn't nessesarily have to be dead. Just in a deep-recharge (coma-like) state. Like stasis lock, or something. :-)
P.S. sorry about the RP thing, and having to leave. I had to call one of the places I've been trying to get a job at. They told me to call back today, and I nearly forgot. oops. (grin.) I'll be on tomorrow, though. :-) |
 Jodi 8/15/06 . chapter 1 Wow! This was good. You made me cry a little. |
 Storm Blue Lightning Saix 8/14/06 . chapter 1wow...that was dark and that's pretty much what i imagened death to be like too...odd huh? anyways another great oneshot RE! |
 Master Solo 8/14/06 . chapter 1Very well-written fic. I like the way you portray character death. |
 Lady Shockbox 8/14/06 . chapter 1Shockbox: Very dark and sad. It's a good oneshot though. I wonder what the bot's name was.
Starscream: And why do you want to know?
Shockbox: Suspense Starscream. Live with it.
Sixshot: You two are both crazy. Anyways, great story. Update another one of your stories soon!
Four out of five stars! |