After a long time our body makes one. We are only this: a body, a heart, an only soul.

Magnificent! I loved it! :hugs and kisses:

So beautiful, the lemon was so emotional an was truly a love making, not just sex. Beautiful! Kira coming back just for her made me smile.

I am so happy you updated!

Nice work.:) Excellent use of flashbacks of the Gundam series in this thing, & the flashback of the sex that Kira 7 Cagalli had. It's good. However, your spelling & grammer, DESPERATELY need work. You also need to work on putting spaces between letters, as there are instances where multiple words are fused together. You should fix them. Well, anyway, update soon.

Well I've been avoiding this story for quite some time because of the 'Lemon' tag but I'm glad I read it in the end. Your English is indeed a little weak but it's enough to get the message across so I applaude your effort. As for the Lemon scene I was able to skip and ignore it thanks to the warning on the Start/End of it, but I did enjoy the rest of the story. I'd love to help you with your English translations but unfortunately I'm a horrible writer because I tend to add unnecessary details. In any case I hope you're able to find a prereader; good luck on your future works.

Its nice Its Nice Its nice! I luv kiraxcagalli ! They roxx! Yay!! thx for ya story !! :)

hallo!!

that was really good!

it was beautifull! and it doesn't matter that you're english is not good!! me either!! LOL> if you want a beta I can be one!!

not that I am so good in English but I can help you! :3
ask me if you're interested!!

love ya

-XX-

Aw Kira is so sweet ^ ^
and I am so happy to read this fiction.

So beautiful! you know whats relly amazing about your work? The fact that because it's not in native tongue, and not so prefect in grammar the emotions of the characters get through to the readers even BETTER!

for we have to guess, instead of just reading, we have to feel instead of just zooming on down the page, we imagine how much torture and pleasure they are in by your simple, yet strong words, and the way they love each other is simply wonderful.

i love your story and i was happy to edit and beta it for you, Im sorry if i was bad at it though haha! I'm not sucha good write myself and miss out on a few grammatical errors at times as well.

love you! -hugs n kisses-

Nice work, so they gonna do it again? Considering the fact that you didn't end the fic at the chapter. Perhaps they'll do it in a bathtub or a shower. That's easily as romantic. Or maybe on a beach, that's good too. Well, anyway, update soon.

Man this is good concerning that your not an english person, but it still has a good flow to it, if you need a english beta reader, I'll help. this is soo good that I would like to see another chapter up soon

beautiful imagery, my friend, despite the minor translation confusions it is easy to understand. then again i know some people who wouldn't understand a single sentence of this, such is my fellow americans

i would be happy to edit your story, if you wish

~Ryou

nice fic. But the your english needs improvement.

Ah, interesting. For a while I thought Kira was gonna pork her. I mean, what you did counts more as incest intimacy than incest lemon. I DO hope to see a fic where Kira does her. See ya.

I'm gone for only a day and yet another well-qualified writer graces me with his appearance. You're write, Ani-chan; it was tres bien. I actually like the way it's written- sort of gives it a distant touch. But oui, it was quite well put and very cute. J'adore Kira et Cagalli. Au revoir!

well...if you spoke English Fluently im sure yout writting would be much better than mine, but a good fic none the less...although there are quite a few odd parts that i have to decipher, but dont worry about it, English is the hardest laungauge there is to learn

That was adorable! Magnifique! Je peux utiliser un traducteur pour taper le français, si cela vous aide. J'aime Kira et Cagalli! Ils sont vraiment jolis. J'Aime aussi absolument votre histoire il a été Mis dans ma collection pour Kira et les Histoires Cagalli

This was really a great story, i am shy when it comes to reading lemons but i took a chance you are so cute!! *huggles*

Vous êtes trop jolis Talk to you later ^^