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crazed-ink-slinger
2006-09-26
ch 6,
abusePhew. For a second I was all like NO SIKE! It's a good thing he is ok , as is Wesly, yea for Fred being back too! I'm liking this much. Especially since I've been cursing the name of the last episode for taking away those things which I held dearest. I have to tell you this is the best continuation I've read yet! ^_^ *Throws plot bunnies at your muses*, hopefully some of them stick! Keep it up!
crazed-ink-slinger
2006-09-26
ch 5,
abuseGah, it's so good! but what's all going on! I must KNOW! Keep it up! And who's francis!?!? oh, wait look, another chapter! Yea! This still doesn't get you out of the hurry thing! ^_^
oracle-man
2006-09-22
ch 6,
abuseSWEET!
kim
2006-09-20
ch 6, anon.
abuseHi! I think you were looking for "coma", not "comma". And you've got Doyle's names reversed...Allen Francis..

Wesley's there to help Spike, eh? Nice.

Buffy completely clueless..big surprise, lol.
Kit
2006-09-20
ch 6, anon.
abuseHeh...gotta love when Angel thinks of Spike as his own. I can so totally see Angel and Buffy fighting over who Spike belongs too.
kim
2006-09-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseOne correction, sweetie - Wesley's eyes are blue...very much so, when there's light.

Bringing Allen Doyle back, eh? Cool.
Fred working with Illyria, maybe?
Spike talking to Hamilton...interesting...
Gunn's bit was funny.
And Cordy's got a job to do, as always.
pigmy
2006-08-29
ch 5,
abusei cant wait 13 days! aahhgg this is awesome btw
oracle-man
2006-08-25
ch 4,
abuseO COME THE HELL ON! longer chaps PLEASE!, and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
crazed-ink-slinger
2006-08-23
ch 4,
abuseyou've go tot continue! I really love this. Good job on getting in his head. ^_^ *waits impatiently* hurry! ^_^
willow-wiccan
2006-08-21
ch 3,
abuseAllen Francis Doyle (he said it in Angel S1 E7) x
crazed-ink-slinger
2006-08-20
ch 3,
abuseSorry I don't know about Doyle, but I still think the stoy is great! I'm anticipating the next chapter! ^__^
maewen.leanne
2006-08-20
ch 3,
abuseI'm nearly postivie that Buffy met Doyle briefly once before he died. And his name is Francis Allan Doyle. Wow, I remembered it! Sweet!
kim
2006-08-20
ch 3, anon.
abuseFrancis Allen Doyle, and she only would have seen him very briefly in L.A. when she came after Faith, AtS S1. Knowing Buffy, she wouldn't really remember.

You have a few typos, but it was good, otherwise. You've got her off to help Spike and Angel, so that's the important thing. :)
crazed-ink-slinger
2006-08-16
ch 2,
abuseThanks for updating so quickly! Please keep going. The post NFA thing may have been done, but now your doing it, and it may be different.

Besides, your prologue makes me really excited to see what happnes with Spike! ^_^
MyBlondieBear
2006-08-15
ch 2,
abuseIt's still good, except the chapters could be a little bit longer.
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